flirty mountains peek
in at your body

taken by soul’s backstroking
of backdrop’s blind

jaw droppin’ flares
dazzlin’ in full brights
of night,

reflection ‘tween you and
minty crisp of cloudy

just watch for ice
and undertows,

the latter know the under swell
and wear its perils so well
it begs to show

dangers of a swimming mind
so free, the wake-up jolt’s
bolt strikes five-

then it’s go.

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7 thoughts on “Dreampool

    • Not sure if you mean I do, or don’t write poetry well. I am equally accepting of either response. πŸ˜‰ I actually looked up ARF as an acronym. I don’t like to assume that what’s unfamiliar to me is typo! πŸ˜‰


  1. Lost in translation, yep I can see the confusion, but rather than me trying to explain myself, I just wanted to say you do write great poetry. Just to put your mind at rest ‘arf’ is just a lazy way or saying (writing) ‘half’.


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