tell me a secret,
and i’ll spill
three,
give me five
minutes..
then i’ll leave
you be,
are you free to
shed a little
light on
this
desperately
scribbled
note?
can’t tell if that ink
spot above
your i’s..
a halo or the ring
around my
throat.
Grumpy Gorman
igram: https://www.instagram.com/gèèrumpygorman/?hl=
..think i need off this rocking boat.
visual adapted from painting by Mike Brandly at – https://mikebrandlyauctioneer.wordpress.com/2011/11/19/auctioneers-and-sore-throats/
That is dark and Melancholy, yet the steady rhyme almost makes it enjoyable. Wow.
Wow, thank you.. that’s a thoughtful comment. Sometimes I find that pairing unsettling matter with an almost nursery rhyme rhythm can create a particular feeling… often not so pleasant! 🙂 Thanks for taking the time to read.
My pleasure friend. I got that actually. Quite a trick you have up your sleeves. I found it particularly fascinating. Thank you. I guess I’ll be coming back for more of these kind.
Brilliant.
Some great imagery here my friend! 👍🖤
I appreciate that. You’re quite adept at tilting the frame with the turn of a word yourself!
Thank you, I do try… 😉🖤