2020-11-15- Lingering Shower

please, just two more
minutes in steam
showering..

and i’ll be ready
to brave

the brisk air
on other
side..

of curtain’s
stains,

it’s true, life feels
much wetter..

but better
when..

stretching sleepy
in streams of
hot rain.

Grumpy Gorman
igram: https://www.instagram.com/gèèrumpygorm

image by Eduardo Camacaro at – https://www.pinterest.ca/pin/745064332079972838/

4 thoughts on “2020-11-15- Lingering Shower

      • I’ll def take the compliment. 😉 I feel envy often when I listen to music, especially if the artist is really into what they’re doing.. as it’s something I’d so desperately like to do but I don’t seem to grasp music theory very well. I guess envy looks a lot like inspiration.. heh. I know you weren’t fishing, but what I envy about your writing is how the tone of your poems can change every time you read it. I think the brevity and succinctness makes their impact strong, but also leaves room to breathe. Also a lot of very relatable topics with a vulnerability most keep closer to the chest. Like I said, I know you weren’t asking for a compliment, and I wouldn’t be offering it if I didn’t believe it, or think it independent of this comment. All the best!

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